Do you like the first bit of my story?

Once Upon a Time, Cinderella was washing the dishes for her evil step mother... I wish her life is so cool. Going to a ball, meeting a prince, falling in love. Way better than my life! I am Violet Smith; I have eight siblings, Juliet, Mathew, Amanda, Jake, Kellie, Morgan, and my snobby step sister Caitlin. My life is a wreak! My parents got divorced when I was two, I have an evil step mom that hates me and everyone in my family ignores me because I am the youngest!